Questの3件目はとても長文で修正が面倒だと思いますので、以下に変更箇所のみ示しますので、この場で翻訳をお願いします。
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[変更前]but in order to do so we must first slay one of the Fahakin Generals!\n\nDrek must be stopped, Find |cFFFF0000a Fahakin General|u and kill him,
[変更後]but in order to do so we must first slay Sord'its!\n\nDrek must be stopped, Find |cFFFF0000Sord'its|u and kill him,