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1 : ☆大学時代で学ぶべきことで大切なこと(2) / 2 : 大学時代に学ぶこと(1) / 3 : 大学時代で学ぶことで、一番大切なこと(6) / 4 : 大学時代に学ぶべきことで、一番大切なこと(4) / 5 : 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、一番大切なこと(3) / 6 : 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、1番大切なこと(4) / 7 : 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、一番大切なこと(3) / 8 : 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、大切なこと(5) / 9 : 大学時代で学ぶべきことで大切なこと(1) / 10 : 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、大切なこと(4)

▲1▼ ☆大学時代で学ぶべきことで大切なこと (Res:2)

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1 名前：chama291 投稿日： 2013/05/21(火) 16:37:42

In my opinion, it is important to discover and think about yourself at the college.
For example, think about; what you are, what you want to become in the future,
what can you do now, and so on.
Thinking these things make us to have strong mind and confidence in ourselves
.

2 名前：3n4ntk 投稿日： 2013/07/06(土) 08:44:43

× What can you do now
↓
○ What you can do now
この文の前の文と統一した方がいいとおもいます。

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▲2▼ 大学時代に学ぶこと (Res:1)

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1 名前：3n4ntk 投稿日： 2013/07/06(土) 08:33:43

When we are college student, we should learn many things to practice of society,Especially,we should learn about time and words because they are most important things in society.First,we must do every things in time in society.If someone can not do things which the person should do in time,someone will lose work,and around many people are given damage.It is important to think time in college student life so that we use time great ways.Second,we should also use words which express expecting to elderly people. We can learn as practicing of society during college student life.

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▲3▼ 大学時代で学ぶことで、一番大切なこと (Res:6)

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1 名前：call1007amma 投稿日： 2013/05/07(火) 13:53:46

The most important thing in college is to learn what you want. And You do the best as much as possible. But In Soka Woman's College, You have to learn to act like lady. So I think you can get good education in all the way.

2 名前：Yhe7115 投稿日： 2013/05/15(水) 11:49:19

And You→and you

3 名前：Def58 投稿日： 2013/06/18(火) 09:15:55

~possible.Because~→~possible,because~

4 名前：Def58 投稿日： 2013/06/18(火) 09:20:50

In Soka→in Soka

5 名前：Def58 投稿日： 2013/06/18(火) 09:23:28

Soka Woman's College →Soka Women's College

6 名前：Def58 投稿日： 2013/06/18(火) 09:25:23

College,You→College,you

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▲4▼ 大学時代に学ぶべきことで、一番大切なこと (Res:4)

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1 名前：0Mnr1 投稿日： 2013/05/07(火) 14:52:37

I think the most important things in this college is studying English. Because we are learning English Communication. We want to get English skills. I want to speak English frequently and listen exactly. I entered this university for it. So I have to study English very hard and get various skills. I think it is the most important things. It is important to communication with friend too. We are in college only two years.So we should enjoy college life. Studying hard and enjoy college life with friend is important things in our college.

2 名前：Thankyou39 投稿日： 2013/05/14(火) 14:13:35

with fiend ➡with friends

3 名前：R0e9k206 投稿日： 2013/05/15(水) 22:45:27

You said "this college" and "this university".
I think we are studying in "college".

4 名前：Def58 投稿日： 2013/06/18(火) 09:18:26

~English.Because~→~English,because~

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▲5▼ 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、一番大切なこと (Res:3)

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1 名前：M14J15L23 投稿日： 2013/05/14(火) 00:09:50

I think studying English is most important thing. Because I want to be a ground staff
of Narita airport. To get a job,I have to study English very hard in university days.

2 名前：下島投稿日： 2013/05/14(火) 00:51:41

most inportant thing → the most importnat thing
最上級にはtheをつける

3 名前：chama291 投稿日： 2013/05/23(木) 16:48:48

get a job → get the job

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▲6▼ 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、1番大切なこと (Res:4)

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1 名前：nh0820163 投稿日： 2013/05/07(火) 10:50:04

I think it is study of English.
Of course there are few important things.
For example, playing,club-activities and part-time-job.
But I came to learn English at this college.
So,I think it is most important things.

2 名前：Sweet106 投稿日： 2013/05/15(水) 09:31:03

So, I think it is most important things. → so, I think it is the most important things.

3 名前：chama291 投稿日： 2013/05/23(木) 16:43:04

× few
○ a few
few は「ほとんど～ない」という意味になってしまうため。

4 名前：chama291 投稿日： 2013/05/23(木) 16:45:55

So, I think it is the most important things. →thing
大切なことは複数あるのではなく、一つのことをいっているため。

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▲7▼ 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、一番大切なこと (Res:3)

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1 名前：aooochanXx37 投稿日： 2013/05/01(水) 14:18:38

Most people may think university is the place that study only technical subject. However, I think there is the most important thing in university that is to communicate with many people. University class system is not same as high school or junior high school. Unlike high school, class can be chosen whatever students like subject so students are not always same class. In different situation, people can speak their own ideas that is the most important. I hope university is not only study technical department, but also learn manner.

2 名前：chama291 投稿日： 2013/05/23(木) 16:34:07

×～is the place that study only technical subject.
○～is the place where the people study only technical subject.

3 名前：chama291 投稿日： 2013/05/23(木) 16:38:19

× same class
○ In the same class

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▲8▼ 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、大切なこと (Res:5)

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1 名前：SWAGGER 投稿日： 2013/05/07(火) 18:53:32

I think that we should study hard and make a friend.
What to do?
Do you come to college to play!?
Noooooo!!!!
This is because it grows up.
It is to achieve one's mission to grow up.
I do not yet know what one's mission is either,
but I think that I only do that you should do it and see it now.

2 名前：Arkis17 投稿日： 2013/05/08(水) 18:33:06

This is because ←this reason is

3 名前：Sweet106 投稿日： 2013/05/13(月) 00:55:45

× make a friend ◯ make friends

4 名前：maros 投稿日： 2013/05/21(火) 10:06:16

×I do not yet know
↓
○I do not know yet
○Yet, I do not know

5 名前：chama291 投稿日： 2013/05/23(木) 16:17:34

What to do?だと文脈が伝わらないので、
why we are here now や
why we come to the college などといれるといいと思います。

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▲9▼ 大学時代で学ぶべきことで大切なこと (Res:1)

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1 名前：B10090810n 投稿日： 2013/05/21(火) 13:32:39

I think that it is important to find your dream of the future.
Of course, it's important to study something.
For example English and economics.

Then, why do we study English and economics?
I think that we must think the reason of what we do study.
And we should connect it with your dream.

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▲10▼ 大学時代で学ぶべきことで、大切なこと (Res:4)

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1 名前：ch4809un 投稿日： 2013/05/07(火) 13:08:23

It is important for us learn English and importance of friends .
Because English is the most useful in my future . I want to be do the education support of developing country.
English is the most important for my future .

The importance of friends is important for me .
Because if there is not a support ,the person can speak nothing.

2 名前：Ti0801 投稿日： 2013/05/07(火) 15:36:27

It is important for us to learn English and importance of friends because English is the most useful in my future.
I want to be a educator who support the developing country so English is essential for my future.
Then,the existence of friend is important for me since if there is no surppot,we can speak nothing.

3 名前：aooochanXx37 投稿日： 2013/05/19(日) 14:53:44

The importance of friends is important for me .
↓
Another reasons why I think friends is important because they always help me for any wayside.

4 名前：Jordan5841 投稿日： 2013/05/20(月) 15:36:41

It is important for usのあとにtoがいります。

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