トピック：Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
This is a difficult topic and it doesn't have a clear answer. Because this topic depends by the person's personality and the situations surrounding you. If you're independent person then it will be better for you to learn by yourself. On the other hand, if you aren't want to study by yourself then it will be better for you to learn from a teacher. Personally, I would like to choose learn from a teacher for the following three reasons.
First of all, in my opinion, I think learn from a teacher can save your time. Although we can improve our skill in certain filed by ourselves, but we can acquire skill faster if we can hear someone's advice, especially from a well experienced teacher. For example, when I am in a high school, I really want to improve my chemistry score because I am not very good at chemistry. First, I try to ask my friends if I had some questions about chemistry homework because I just don't like my chemistry teacher. He speaks too fast and it makes me can't understand what he said very well. Then, I asked one of my best friends about the homework of chemistry. She can't give me a reasonable and persuasive answer. Finally, I decided to ask my chemistry teacher. And from that I convinced my answer. Through this experience, I think it is the fastest way to ask your teacher when you have some questions about your school work.
The next reason is that learn from a teacher especially he or she is a professor and he or she is the expert of certain field will be the easiest way when you have questions about your own dissertation. While I am writing the dissertation for the national conference such as IEEE, I always be afraid of the quality of my dissertation. When I came up with this kind of problem, the best choice for me to solve this question is very simple. Just send an email to your teacher! Let he or she check your dissertation. I think you will surely get a persuasive answer quickly, precisely and accurately.
Last but not the least, you can learn not only the knowledge from your teacher but also you can learn the great personality from your teacher. For example, my best English teacher's name is Van. She has great English skill. Whenever I have had some grammar, pronunciation and vocabulary questions. She always answer me quickly and accurately with great explanations. And she also has an amiable smile when she teaching me English. She is not only enthusiastic about teaching English but she also has a great personality. When I was nervous and negative about taking the toefl exam, she was kind and sympathetic to me. She gave me some helpful advice and kind words. I want to learn her attitude towards person who have trouble like me. After all, I became positive towards my study and passed the minimum required score of toefl for the entrance examination of my university. I really appreciated her from those kindness.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above. I think learn from a teacher can save your time, will be the easiest way for you to reach your academic goal and you can also learn personality from your teacher. I totally support choice that learn from a teacher. (555 words)
修正後：This is a difficult topic and it doesn't have a clear answer. Because this topic depends on the person's personality and the situations surrounding you. If you're an independent person, then it will be better for you to learn by yourself. On the other hand, if you don't want to study by yourself, then it will be better for you to learn from a teacher. Personally, I would like to choose learn from a teacher for the following three reasons.
