トピック:Nowadays people spend more and more time on their smartphones. Do you agree that smartphones provide a positive influence for us? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In my opinion, 21 century could be called Information century. Almost citizens in Japan have their own smartphones. Personally,I agree that smartphones provide a positive influence for us for the following three reasons.
The first reason is that smartphones can make our life more convenient. As for me, if I have some questions such as what is the right route can bring me to the station, I think the best solution for this problem is to use smartphones search through Internet. I can get my answer not only quickly but also accurately. Not only about me, I think even the elderly people can get benefits through using smartphones. Although many elder people can't use smartphones adequately, but I always recommend my parents to use smartphone. There are lots of coupon site on web-market. And i think my parents can buy goods which have good quality and always cheaper than supermarkets near my house. I can add a one more reasonable reason. Recently, there are a lot of Languages Schools are established through Internet. And I also learning English at those school. I can practice and improve my English ability through Skype. There are just too many good examples to show that smartphones are convenient in our daily life.
The second reason is that smartphones can make our life more colorful. There are a lot of application which I can download in my smartphones. Not only I can obtain game applications but I can also obtain some useful application such as household management application. Through this application, I can deal with my financial problems, and I can calculate my daily expenses such as electrical appliance, rents and so on. As I mentioned before there are also a lot of application such as Skype can be used at daily communication, languages acquisition. Through recent technology advancement, I can also use my smartphones as a remote control device to control my TV and air conditioner. Such application can really be the spice of my life. I really enjoy to use it! There are a lot of interesting application in smartphone. I always talk with my co-workers about those interesting application.
The final reason is that smartphones can make deepen friendship between me and my friends. I can connect to people around the world through using a smartphones, and actually, I made a lot of friend in foreign countries such as Russian, America, Canada, Korean and so on. Every time we have conversation with them through Skype or line, I think I really born in a good time. Besides, through using smartphones, I think I not only can talk people all over the world but I can also talk to them at anytime as I can. From early morning to middle of the night. And I can talk to them when I am in station or at library, at university, at my own house. Every time I chitchat with my friend, the topic maybe the school homework or some serious problem. I think I smartphone its really convenience and I am sure that I can deepen friendship with my friends through using smartphone. We can both communicate through Line(an instant message exchange tool) or just through a single phone call.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above: smartphones can make our life more convenient, colorful and can deepen friendship between me and my friends. I strongly agree with idea that smartphones provide a positive influence for modern citizens.(575 words)
トピックDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.
As for me, I really like to read book. I read at least 5 books a month. And there are wide variety of books, so I disagree with the idea that People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion for the following reasons.
First reason is that I think when people only keep read those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts, it will be boring for them. As for me, I am working as a software developer, I should read a lot of books about software development because technologies in high-tech world such as software development changes rapidly. I should keep up with the time. So, I can say that it is very important for me to read books which contains a lot of established facts, such as new software development languages or technique in programing. Thus, I can keep my software development skill competitive in my company. But the question is that if I always read those difficult practical books, I will be very boring. Sometimes I try to change my taste and just read some gag comics.
The second reason is that there are wide range of book genre such as historian book, comic book, comedy book, love romance book, horror book and so on. Reading those books will surely make our life more colorful than read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. As or me, I really love in reading Japanese comic book such as dragon ball and Draemon. While I am a child, I read a lot of comic and share them with my friends. We can share our common interest about those comics and have a lot of fun. We talked about the comics and I even shared my comic books with my friends. Whenever I read dragon ball, actually it was the first comic books that I ever read, it bring me back to my childhood. Gave me a lot of beautiful memory. I think dragon ball was once famous 20 years ago. But until nowadays its still very popular all over the world, there are also many movies and animation was made about dragon ball. I heard that Hollywood made a movie about dragon ball, too.
The final reason is that we can learn a lot of things not only from those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts but also from fictional books. The one of my favorite book was written by a scientist named Ray Kurzweil. Ray Kurzweil is a specialist especially Artificial Intelligence. Ray Kurzweil says that on his imagination Technological Singularity is near(Technological Singularity is the certain point that machine became wiser than human kind). He predicted that Technological Singularity will happens in 2045. After Technological Singularity points the world around us will dramatically changes and can not back anymore. Actually Technological Singularity is a terminology based by Ray Kurzweil's imagination, but there are many engineer believes on him. Even this book is a SF book, but I think is still very practical and useful.
In conclusion, from what I mentioned above: people only keep read those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts will be very boring, there are wide range of book genre, we can learn a lot of things not only from those books that are about real things. I strongly disagree with the topic.(589 words)
トピック3:Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different from your parents' generation? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
In my opinion, I think my generation is quite different from my parents' generation in many ways. If I should choose some differences, the top on my list is adaptation to Internet and Smartphone. I will give my opinion for the following reasons.
First of all, modern society could be called as Information Age. If you want to live conveniently, you should be able to use many hi-tech tools such as Internet and Smartphone. I think many people in my generation can use Internet and Smartphone properly. Then how about my parent' generation? Many of them can't use Internet and Smartphone very well because at the time of their age, there is no Internet and Smartphone. As for me, I always buy goods through Internet, and I think goods sell in net-shop are not only cheaper but also have high quality than compared to real super markets. Sometimes my parents ask me to buy some goods instead of them because they can't use Internet. And my parents also ask me to teach them how to use Internet. Every Sunday afternoon, If I am not working, I try to teach them the basic usage of Internet, but they still can't use Internet very well as many elderly people do. There are also many other merits for using Internet, such as find friends from Facebook, Twitter and share your opinion with people all over the world. I really hope my parents can use Internet as soon as possible.
The next reason is that I think many people in my generation are make communication through Smartphone, but many people in my parents' age still use the old telephone. I often use a application called Line(Smartphone's application, which can exchange instant message through Internet) in Japan with my friends and family. Line is a free application, by using Line, you can call your friends freely. I think the most important point for communication through Smartphone is that you can connect to the Internet directly and you can communicate with people not only your friends but you can communicate with people all over the world. You can share same interest with them anytime you want, and anywhere you want. You can send them instant message at station, at library, at your house, and you can send them instant message at early morning or at middle of the night. Last month, I taught my parent that if they can use Skype, they can save their money. The phone call through Skype will only cost $100 per year, and it doesn't depends how many time you have called. $100 is all inclusive. They were look liked very happy while they use Skype. And they also said that they have joined in some language exchange group in Skype. They have already made some friends through Skype.
In conclusion, as what I have mentioned above. I think although my generation is different from my parents' generation in adaptation to Internet and Smartphone, but after the skill acquisition struggle, I think they could get accustomed with those hi-tech, and finally they could use Internet and Smartphone. This will be a spice of their life, and made their life more colorful and enjoyable.(541 words)
トピック4：People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
This is difficult question and there are a lot of ways to escape the stress and difficulties in modern life. Some people says doing exercise is the correct answer, while other people says that work in their gardens is the best choice. As for me, the best ways of reducing stress is study harder and play around harder for the following reasons.
First of all, in my opinion, I think study harder is one of the best choice. I am working as a software developer and software technology is changing very rapidly. There are a lot of young people who are fully skilled and enrolled to my company. In such high competitive environment, I think the best choice to keep myself to be skillful is to study harder. And only in this way, I think I can keep my salary reminds high. Another reason that keep me study harder about software development is that I think once I decided to work as a software developer, I should never give up to be more skillful and to be more reliable to my co-workers. Although keep study harder is a very difficult task, but I think I still have to be persistence about my faith. And finally, I decided to study abroad to deepen my software development skill. That is the reason why I took toefl-ibt test here, too.
Last but not the least, in my opinion, I think if I always study very hard, I will feel my life is a little boring. And I think if I want to keep my motivation towards my work, I also have to relieve myself from daily working and studying stress, too. I think through play around hard such as enjoy some extreme sports can really stimulate my life, and be a spice of my life. I can also make friends all over the world through doing those extreme sports. One of my favorite extreme sports is diving, and one of the best place for divers is a island named Bora Bora. This island is located on the Tahiti. I know this island through Internet. One day, I just enjoy net-surfing as always, I found a small, but very beautiful coral island from the traveling site. And many visitors say this island was amazing, looks like a heaven. After read those phrases I really interested in Bora Bora island and decided to go there. The most extreme diving in Bora Bora island is swimming with sharks. It was really a good experience for me and I made me want to go to Bora Bora island one more time. In my opinion, I think Bore Bore island is a rare place which can offer such thrilling diving for divers.And in Bora Bora island, you can not only swimming with sharks but also can swimming with dolphins, stingrays and sea turtles. If you go Bora Bora island, I promise you it will be a memorable traveling experience for you.
In conclusion, from what I mentioned above, I really recommend study harder and play around harder are the best ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life.(528 words)
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Last but not the least, in my opinion, I think if I always study hard, I will feel a little bored. And I think if I want to keep my motivation towards my work, I also have to relieve myself from daily working and stressful studying, too. I think through playing around hard such as enjoy some extreme sports can really stimulate my life, and be a spice of my life. I can also make friends all over the world through doing those extreme sports. One of my favorite extreme sports is diving, and one of the best place for divers is a island named Bora Bora. This island is located on the Tahiti. I know this island through Internet. One day, I just enjoy net-surfing as always, I found a small, but very beautiful coral island from the traveling site. And many visitors say this island was amazing, looks like a heaven. After read those phrases I really interested in Bora Bora island and decided to go there. The most extreme diving in Bora Bora island is swimming with sharks. It was really a good experience for me and I made me want to go to Bora Bora island one more time. In my opinion, I think Bore Bore island is a rare place which can offer such thrilling diving for divers.And in Bora Bora island, you can not only swimming with sharks but also can swimming with dolphins, stingrays and sea turtles. If you go Bora Bora island, I promise you it will be a memorable traveling experience for you.
In conclusion, from what I mentioned above, I really recommend study harder and play around harder are the best ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life.(528 words)
トピック：If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? why? Use specific reasons and details to expalin your choice.
This is a difficult question because there are a lot of things that I want to choose. If I should choose only one thing, the best on my list must be a artificial intelligenced robot for the following three reasons.
First of all, In my opinion, I think modern people are busy for their jobs. They have huge mount of tasks to do. And they want to watching TV, listening music and play outside instead of doing house chore at home. If there is a artificial intelligenced robot they can do those time consuming tasks instead of modern people. It will really help for people, especially busy ones. As for me, I am working as a software developer. I am always overloaded with my daily work. Sometime I really disgusted with cooking. If there is a artificial intelligenced robot can cook breakfast, lunch, dinner instead of myself, I will really appreciate it.
The second reasons is that if I can have a artificial intelligenced robot, my life will be more colorful. In modern lives, many people spend their time with their pets, such as dogs, cats, birds or fishes. And in my opinion, I think those pets are common pets. If I can live with a artificial intelligenced robot, it must be a very rare event. It can definitely be a spice of my life. And I can also add a extra additional functions to my robot such as play games with me, or go shopping instead of myself. Although add such kinds of extra functions may be very difficult but software development technology can advancing very rapidly. I think someday I can invent a artificial intelligenced robot which can recognize human emotions, and I want to make conversation with such kind of artificial intelligenced robot. I think it will be possible in the near future.
Last but not the least, a artificial intelligenced robot is useful for searching in extreme environments filed such as research in deep ocean or high temperatured volcano activities. Scientists can send a artificial intelligenced robot instead of mankind go into such extreme environment. Today, our planet, earth, has a lot of problems. Depletion of natural resources such as oil and gases, air pollution, water pollution and so on. I have a idea to solve these problems all at once. The answer is to send a artificial intelligenced robot to search and find a new planet that mankind can live in(just look like the hollywoods movie named "intersteller"). We can not only immigrants to that new planet, but we can also transport natural resources from the new planet to the earth. And some projects like I suggested had already lunched by NASA. I am like to watch science fiction movies. And I definitely hope someday we can go out of the earth and enjoy our life in such new found land. I think my dream will come true until the 22th century.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above, a artificial intelligenced robot can make our lives better, can make our lives more colorful and can help our research in extreme environments. I really want to choose send a artificial intelligenced robot representing our country to an international exhibition.(536 words)
placate なだめる、和らげるsoothe,appease
inundate 殺到する、水浸しにする、氾濫する
protest 抗議
impetus 起動力
mercantile 商業の、商人の
strand 立往生させる座礁させる
arsenal 兵器庫、兵器工場
insolvent 破産した、支払い不能の
decree 法令、布告
Fate has decreed that we should meet.
admonish 忠告する
The teaccher must admonish the students to be more serious.
loquacious おしゃべりの、話好きな
attrition 自然減、摩擦、消耗
platypus カモノハシ
fiscal 財政の、会計の
plaintiff 原告、告訴人 defendant
verdict 評決
residue 残留物、剰余
retard 遅らせる、妨害する
Due to a lack of funds, the project was retarded.
viable 実行可能な、生存に適した。 feasible
remit 送金する
The student had his prents remit his tuition.
fathom 測る、見抜く、理解する
many scientists are trying to fathom the magnitude of the meteorite impact
chuckle くすくす笑い
liaison 連絡、リエゾン
stern 厳格な
The boss was stern with his subordinates.
impede 妨げる
The construction noise impeded my concentration.
peripheral 重要でない。
Susie stuck to peripheral matters and missed the central problem.
replenish 補給する。再び満たす。
succinct 簡潔な、ずばりの
His advice was succinct.
poach 密漁する
smugglers 密輸人
hectic てんやわんやの
tentative 仮の、試験的な
archipelago 群島、諸島
shoddy 粗雑な、安物の
ambush 待ち伏せて急襲する
the president has been ambushed by supporters of apartheid.
bountiful 豊富な
what a bountiful land we live in!
meager 乏しい、貧弱な
pelase accept our meager but heartfelt gift.
tripe くだらないもの
prawn クルマエビ
placate なだめる、和らげる
the presidennt tried hard to placate his opponents.
inundate 水浸しにする、氾濫する
the TV station was inundated with sounds of protest.
taint 傷つける
impetus はずみ。衝動
strand 立ち往生させる。座礁させる。
arsenal 兵器庫、兵器工場
insolvent 倒産した破産。
トピック：Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and exampes to support your answer.
This topic is a difficult questions and it doesn't have a clear answer. Some people would prefer some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. While other people would prefer universities require students to specialize in one subject. In my opinion, I would choose specialize in one subject for the following three reasons.
First of all, specialize in one subject can save students time. As for me, now I am a software developer. While I am a students, I have already decided my future career, become a software engineer. I was really addicted in playing video games when I am in high school. That is the main reason why I chose computer science as my major. Not only me, a lot of students in computer science department say that they decided to be a software engineer because their loved in playing video games, from such experience, they decided to develop some amazing software in the future. In may opinion, I think it is waste of time if I take other subjects such as art, sculpture. They are totally unrelated to my major and it is useless to spend much time on such major.
The next reason is that, specialize in one subject is good for students' future career. As for me, I think focus on computer science related subject is the best choice for students if they have already decided their future career. If you focused on one subject, that means you can concentrate on it. Thus, students can be more skillful through such process, and can have enough time to participate interns in some famous IT company. This will make their resume looks better. If you can specialized in your subject and have a lot of experience on such subject. I believe that you can truly find a good job.
Last but not the least, specialize in one subject can deepen students' expertise knowledge. Although I was only in one subject, computer science. There is a wide range of knowledge in this field such as artificial intelligence, machine learning, big data, wireless network, computer vision, data mining and so on. It was really difficult for me to study all of those expertise knowledge. I am working as a software developer for 8 years. But until now, I think I am still not good at many field of computer science. It is impossible for me to take classes in many subjects. If I can focus only at computer science, if will surely deepen my expertise knowledge. I want become a data scientist someday.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above, specialize in one subject can save students time, good for students' future career and deepen students' expertise knowledge. I would prefer to choose specialize in one subject. (461 words)
トピック：CORRECTED!!!:Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and exampes to support your answer.
This topic is a difficult questions and it doesn't have a clear answer. Some people would prefer some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. While other people would prefer universities require students to specialize in one subject. In my opinion, I would choose specialize in one subject for the following three reasons.
First of all, specializing in one subject can save students time and efforts. As for me, now I am a software developer. While I was a student, I have already decided something for my future career which is to become a software engineer. I was really addicted in playing video games when I was in high school. That was the main reason why I chose computer science as my major. Not only me, but there are also a lot of students in computer science department said that they decided to be a software engineer because their intrest is in playing video games. From such experience, they decided to develop some amazing software in the future. In my opinion, I think it is a waste of time if I take other subjects such as art, sculpture, etc. They are totally unrelated to my major and it is useless to spend much time on such major.
The next reason is that specializing in one subject is good for students' future career. As for me, I think focusing on computer science related subject is the best choice for students if they have already decided their future career. If you focused on one subject, that means you can concentrate on it and you can also widen your knowledge about that particular subject. Thus, students can be more skillful through such process, and can have enough time to participate interns in some famous IT companies. This will make their resume looks better and presentable. If you can specialized in your subject and have a lot of experience on it. I believe that you can truly find a good job.
Last but not the least, specializing in one subject can deepen students' expertise knowledge. I took only one subject which is computer science. There is a wide range of knowledge in this field such as artificial intelligence, machine learning, big data, wireless network, computer vision, data mining and so on. It was really difficult for me to study all of those expertise knowledge. I am working as a software developer for 8 years. But until now, I think I am still not good at many field of computer science because I took many subject which is not related to my major. It is impossible for me to take classes in many subjects. If I can focus only at computer science, I will surely deepen my expertise knowledge. I want to become a data scientist someday.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above, specializing in one subject can save students time, good for students' future career and deepen students' expertise knowledge. That is why I would prefer to choose specializing in one subject. (503 words)
トピック： a friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either 1.to go on vacation 2.to buy a car. Your friends has asked you for advice. Compare your friends's two choices and explain which one you think your friend should choose.Usee specific reasons and details to support your choice.
This is a difficult question because both go on vacation and buy a car have its merits and demerits. Some people would prefer to use money to go on vacation. While other people would prefer to use money to buy a car. Personally, I would choose to go on vacation for the following three reasons.
First of all, go on vacation can relieve my friend from his or her daily working stress. As for me, I am working as a software developer. Software development is one of the hardest job in Japan. I always very busy for my job and some of my co-workers can't tolerate such extreme conditions. Many of them decided to quit the job or just become mental disorder, but I really want to persistent on my own job because I have already worked as a software developer more than 8 years. I will never give up my career and sometimes I need play around to relieve my stress. I think go on vacation is the best solution for this problem. So I will recommend my friends(He or she is a software developer, too) to go on vacation.
The second reason is that go on vacation can make my friend's life more colorful. There are a lot of traveling companies which offering a wide range of tours in Japan. You can go anywhere you want to go. Not only the famous countries around the world such as Italy, France, America and so on. But you can also go to mysterious and unexplored regions such as Himalayas, tahiti, etc. It can stimulate my friend's life and can be a spice of he or she's life. There are a lot of countries that my friend can visit. But the top on my list must be Bora Bora island. Bora bora island is a small coral island located in tahiti. You can enjoy the beach resort and diving there. The specialty of Bora Bora island is that you can diving with sharks. It must be a rare experience for you.
Last but not at least, go on vacation to many countries can broaden my friend's cultural horizons and experience horizons. If my friends can go to many countries and meet with people especially who have different cultural and educational back ground with he or she. It can surely broaden his or her cultural horizons and can deepen his or her point of view. They can improve their understatement towards different culture. This experience can also improve his or her inter personal skill and can make them know how to deal with people different from him or her properly. If you go to abroad, you must experience some culture shocks. Nowadays is a internationalized age, it is very important for you to know people from different country.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above, go on vacation can relieve my friend from his or her daily working stress, can make my friend's life more colorful and can broaden my friend's cultural horizons and experience horizons. I really recommend my friends to choose to go on vacation.(525 words)
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You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
トピック：You have decided to give several hours of your time each month to improve the community where you live. What is one thing you will do to improve your community? Why? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice.
There are many things that I want to do to improve the community where I live. For example, pick up garbage threw in the sea coast line, help elderly people, teaching basic computer programming to children who live in the neighborhood. Personally, I would like teaching children about basic computer programming in the neighborhood for the following three reasons.
First of all, we can say today's society is information society, if children acquired basic computer programming skill then it will be helpful for them. After the acquisition of the skills, it must be advantage for children for their education and future career. Japanese government has decided computer programming be a required subject from elementary school education because Japanese government want to strengthen their IT industries. If children can learn some basic computer programming skill, this not only means they can finish their school work easier, but also means they match their government needs and will become a talented person in future IT field. IT field is one of the most famous field of jobs and you can have high salary compare to other field. IT fields is one of the most famous fields of jobs and you can have high salary compare to other field. If you have inborn talent at computer programming you can also invent some specific software, and have your own company. These means you will have great opportunity for success. You will obtain both fame and wealth if you can invent a proper software. There are a lot of billionaire around the world for their own software invention, such as Bill Gates, he made Microsoft office and he is obviously one of the most successful entrepreneur in IT filed. Other good example is Mark Zuckerberg who is also a famous entrepreneur in IT field. He is famous for invented Facebook. I think invent a useful software is easy and fast way for young people who want to be success compare to other industries. It is really important for young children to start study with computer programming in their young age.
The next reason is that basic computer programming skill can improve children's logical thinking ability. As a proverb says that killing two birds with one stone. You can acquire both basic computer programming skill and logical thinking ability through this kind of learning process. Because computer programming is based on the basic algorithm and basic algorithm is based on the basic logical thinking. If you are good at logical thinking you will be good at science soon.
Last but not the least, in my opinion, I think if I can teach basic computer programming to children, thus means I can improve my teaching skill. I want to gain a teaching assistant position if I can study abroad. It will be really helpful for me to teaching young children before teaching at a university. Through this kind of teaching process I think it can definitely improve my teaching skill. And I can acquire a lot of teaching experience and I can learn how to interact with my students properly. It must be advantage for me through teaching children living in the neighborhood.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above, I would like teaching children about basic computer programming in the neighborhood. ( 524 words)
トピック：Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
This is a difficult topic and it doesn't have a clear answer. Because this topic depends by the person's personality and the situations surrounding you. If you're independent person then it will be better for you to learn by yourself. On the other hand, if you aren't want to study by yourself then it will be better for you to learn from a teacher. Personally, I would like to choose learn from a teacher for the following three reasons.
First of all, in my opinion, I think learn from a teacher can save your time. Although we can improve our skill in certain filed by ourselves, but we can acquire skill faster if we can hear someone's advice, especially from a well experienced teacher. For example, when I am in a high school, I really want to improve my chemistry score because I am not very good at chemistry. First, I try to ask my friends if I had some questions about chemistry homework because I just don't like my chemistry teacher. He speaks too fast and it makes me can't understand what he said very well. Then, I asked one of my best friends about the homework of chemistry. She can't give me a reasonable and persuasive answer. Finally, I decided to ask my chemistry teacher. And from that I convinced my answer. Through this experience, I think it is the fastest way to ask your teacher when you have some questions about your school work.
The next reason is that learn from a teacher especially he or she is a professor and he or she is the expert of certain field will be the easiest way when you have questions about your own dissertation. While I am writing the dissertation for the national conference such as IEEE, I always be afraid of the quality of my dissertation. When I came up with this kind of problem, the best choice for me to solve this question is very simple. Just send an email to your teacher! Let he or she check your dissertation. I think you will surely get a persuasive answer quickly, precisely and accurately.
Last but not the least, you can learn not only the knowledge from your teacher but also you can learn the great personality from your teacher. For example, my best English teacher's name is Van. She has great English skill. Whenever I have had some grammar, pronunciation and vocabulary questions. She always answer me quickly and accurately with great explanations. And she also has an amiable smile when she teaching me English. She is not only enthusiastic about teaching English but she also has a great personality. When I was nervous and negative about taking the toefl exam, she was kind and sympathetic to me. She gave me some helpful advice and kind words. I want to learn her attitude towards person who have trouble like me. After all, I became positive towards my study and passed the minimum required score of toefl for the entrance examination of my university. I really appreciated her from those kindness.
In conclusion, from what I have mentioned above. I think learn from a teacher can save your time, will be the easiest way for you to reach your academic goal and you can also learn personality from your teacher. I totally support choice that learn from a teacher. (555 words)
修正後：This is a difficult topic and it doesn't have a clear answer. Because this topic depends on the person's personality and the situations surrounding you. If you're an independent person, then it will be better for you to learn by yourself. On the other hand, if you don't want to study by yourself, then it will be better for you to learn from a teacher. Personally, I would like to choose learn from a teacher for the following three reasons.
